I will never forget that day,
after a hard loss,
how we had nothing to say,
about how we lost or why we lost,
that bright and cheerful spring day.
I will never forget that day,
A luggage cart was in the hall,
with nothing in the way,
between us and a fall,
with that luggage cart.
I will never forget that day,
flying in the air,
how there was nothing much to say,
over all the laughter from falling hard,
That bright and cheerful spring day.
I will never forget that day,
that will make memories forever.
That is a great poem! I like the way you use a repetitive pattern. ("I will never forget that day") Also, the words you choose to rhyme fit nicely.
ReplyDeleteI also enjoyed this poem for the same reason. What you do here with repetition is very cool. I like the sound, and the way each stanza unfolds with its own image.
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